Alchemist Beauty [UPDATED]

[EDIT]: After I've got a lot of feedback I've decided to make some changed to this drawing. First of all, I've changed hers torso. Yes, she got skinnier, I'm not complitally ok with it, but it makes it look lass static and that was my point. Also changed shape of hips. Can't complain, I'm very happy with it. I also changed arms slighly bit, making them thinner as they are closer to the hand, as well as with making thumb on the left arm more natural. Also, few smaller changed, like making some lines sharper or smoother. Is that edit alright? Here is an old version:
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8 hours well spent! This is by far, the best art I've made to date.
Of course hand looks weird and rocks look... laughable. But I'm more than proud of everything else, I did my absolute best here ;w;
I may or may not have a crush on this lady~<3
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